| Author | Message: tell me what you think.... | Posted by: KELBEL519
On: 6/9/1999 at 11:34:33 PM GMT
Message #: 1505
See headers | Guys, i wrote this for school, i wrote a few tribute poems. Here's the one i
wrote about berandette. I thought you would appreciate it.
A voice that reaches the heavens
And white skin like a porcelain angel,
She is a living legend, glowing in the spotlight.
Every line she reads,
Every move she makes
Is an ingenious expression of truth;
Passion found deep within one's heart and soul
Making every performance honest, pure and true.
This unique marvel will find a special place
In the hearts of all who see her.
She's an audience's treasure,
And forever Broadway's brightest gem.
-Kelli Ruttle
Well, what do you think? I think I really like the ending. When I was
writing it, I tried to picture little things she's done over the years that
really impressed me, and gather them into a few words. So, it's at your
mercy, be gentle.
| | Author | Message: Re: tell me what you think.... | Posted by: MKahnFan
On: 6/9/1999 at 11:39:11 PM GMT
Message #: 1506
See headers | In a message dated 6/10/99 3:35:24 AM !!!First Boot!!!, KELBEL519@a...
writes:
> Well, what do you think? I think I really like the ending. When I was
> writing it, I tried to picture little things she's done over the years
that
> really impressed me, and gather them into a few words. So, it's at your
> mercy, be gentle.
I'll tell you in public as I told you in private, I thought it was beautiful.
You're very talented, Kelli.
-Ben
| | Author | Message: Re: tell me what you think.... | Posted by: KELBEL519
On: 6/9/1999 at 11:44:20 PM GMT
Message #: 1507
See headers | thanx, ben.
| | Author | Message: Re: tell me what you think.... | Posted by: Malcolm742
On: 6/9/1999 at 11:51:38 PM GMT
Message #: 1508
See headers | it's wonderful - i really like it
-meghan
| | Author | Message: Re: tell me what you think.... | Posted by: bluedenim
On: 6/10/1999 at 12:21:03 AM GMT
Message #: 1509
See headers | I think it is very good, a great tribute. You should
send it to the Official Site, I bet they would put it
up! I really like it! -Eric
--- KELBEL519@a... wrote:
> From: KELBEL519@a...
>
> Guys, i wrote this for school, i wrote a few tribute
> poems. Here's the one i
> wrote about berandette. I thought you would
> appreciate it.
>
> A voice that reaches the heavens
> And white skin like a porcelain angel,
> She is a living legend, glowing in the spotlight.
> Every line she reads,
> Every move she makes
> Is an ingenious expression of truth;
> Passion found deep within one's heart and soul
> Making every performance honest, pure and true.
> This unique marvel will find a special place
> In the hearts of all who see her.
>
> She's an audience's treasure,
> And forever Broadway's brightest gem.
> -Kelli Ruttle
>
> Well, what do you think? I think I really like the
> ending. When I was
> writing it, I tried to picture little things she's
> done over the years that
> really impressed me, and gather them into a few
> words. So, it's at your
> mercy, be gentle.
>
>
>
>
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| | Author | Message: Re: tell me what you think.... | Posted by: Spchmaster
On: 6/10/1999 at 1:07:06 AM GMT
Message #: 1510
See headers | I like it. It is a pretty fitting tribute to a phenomonal woman! - Carrie
| | Author | Message: Re: tell me what you think.... | Posted by: Intowoods1
On: 6/10/1999 at 3:42:25 PM GMT
Message #: 1514
See headers | simply gorgeous Kelli, wonderfull job!
Andy
| | Author | Message: Re: tell me what you think.... | Posted by: Yfandes1
On: 6/10/1999 at 6:37:40 PM GMT
Message #: 1517
See headers | In a message dated 06/09/99 11:35:39 PM Eastern Daylight Time,
KELBEL519@A... writes:
<< Well, what do you think? I think I really like the ending. When I was
writing it, I tried to picture little things she's done over the years that
really impressed me, and gather them into a few words. So, it's at your
mercy, be gentle. >>
LOL!!! I just wrote her a sonnet for my stupid english class... Lemme see
if I can remember it-
Her hair's a mass of curly flaming red
She has a voice that would an angel shame
The last great star of Broadway it's been said
Her voice and hair- and talent- brought her fame.
I've never heard her sing a sour note
Or stumble over words as she performed
And this is why on her I always dote
When she's on stage it is my heart she warms...
She is the greatest person in the world...
At least I think- and really, I should know!
I've watched her plays since I was just a girl
And loved her still as older I did grow..
Though Bernadette lives in New York, so far
Who could resist so beautiful a star??
LOL, well it's honestly the best I could do. You try writing 14 lines of
poetry in iambic pentameter!! I wrote one about my dog too- now that one's
REALLY bad.
Marie
| | Author | Message: Re: tell me what you think.... | Posted by: bluedenim
On: 6/10/1999 at 6:43:48 PM GMT
Message #: 1518
See headers | lol Marie that's quite funny, but it's not bad for the
format you had to write it in :) -eric
--- Yfandes1@a... wrote:
> From: Yfandes1@a...
>
> In a message dated 06/09/99 11:35:39 PM Eastern
> Daylight Time,
> KELBEL519@A... writes:
>
> << Well, what do you think? I think I really like
> the ending. When I was
> writing it, I tried to picture little things she's
> done over the years that
> really impressed me, and gather them into a few
> words. So, it's at your
> mercy, be gentle. >>
>
> LOL!!! I just wrote her a sonnet for my stupid
> english class... Lemme see
> if I can remember it-
>
> Her hair's a mass of curly flaming red
> She has a voice that would an angel shame
> The last great star of Broadway it's been said
> Her voice and hair- and talent- brought her fame.
> I've never heard her sing a sour note
> Or stumble over words as she performed
> And this is why on her I always dote
> When she's on stage it is my heart she warms...
> She is the greatest person in the world...
> At least I think- and really, I should know!
> I've watched her plays since I was just a girl
> And loved her still as older I did grow..
> Though Bernadette lives in New York, so far
> Who could resist so beautiful a star??
>
> LOL, well it's honestly the best I could do. You
> try writing 14 lines of
> poetry in iambic pentameter!! I wrote one about my
> dog too- now that one's
> REALLY bad.
>
> Marie
>
>
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| | Author | Message: Re: tell me what you think.... | Posted by: Yfandes1
On: 6/10/1999 at 7:53:08 PM GMT
Message #: 1520
See headers | In a message dated 06/10/99 6:43:14 PM Eastern Daylight Time,
wutheringheights00@y... writes:
<< lol Marie that's quite funny, but it's not bad for the
format you had to write it in :) -eric >>
lol, thanks.. I'm kinda fond of it. I really hate writing sonnets though!!
Marie
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